Having a part-time job is a valuable experience for high school students, they can learn many things that are not usually taught in a classroom, for example, they can learn how to work with older people. Having a part-time job gives students a sense of independence, they also get experience with the business world. Having a part-time job gives students a sense of independence, they can also earn money to use for college. Learning about the real world is also important.
lunes, 20 de octubre de 2008
lunes, 8 de septiembre de 2008
Paragraph stimulates
This description was like a tale by fairies or like a visit to the house of the someone famous , maybe an actor or singer, the narrator looked for all decoration details in this room. She was very specific , but I don´t know who are the invited for the tea hour? It description show me that the weather was cold, maybe was winter or autumn, whatever, she felt be as a princess, because I guess...the room was big and georgeous, whit a beatiful view from the balcony.
domingo, 7 de septiembre de 2008
MY FAVORITE PLACE
This place is one of the most peaceful in Iquique, in that place there are a lot of delicious fruits, also there is a thermal water is wery relaxing and you can put mud in your face, from inside the caves, the mud is used for the skin, you can find handycrafts of the zone and the meals have a good taste, This place has a lot of vegetation, because is a oasis in the middle of the desert, is like a mirage but this town is real.
martes, 2 de septiembre de 2008
FREEWRITING
My favorite place is de beach, is one of the most relaxing places, where you can do anything you want like a: sleep, play, speak, run, swim, and go to a party, with friends in the night, the beach is great!! in the beach I knew to my boyfriend, was realy romantic...
Other place is the chinese restaurant
Other place is the chinese restaurant
Answer the followin questions
1. When does the writing process begin?
a: When I have a lot of ideas and prewriting notes to work, I begin my writing process.
2. What does the writing process comprise?
a: all the activities you do, from choosing a topic to turning in a final draft.
3. According to the reading, what are the stages in the writing process?
a:1.-Prewriting
2.-Writing
3.-Revising
4.-Editing
4. What does it imply to say that the writing process is a cycle?
a: It is a cycle because in any point you may loop in and out of other stages, once you start on a writing project, the stages of writing do not occur in any specific order.
5. What does the writing stage consist of?
a:Consist in try to put all the ideas, notes and thoughts on a sheet of paper with cohernce, developing the topic.
6. In what stage do you correct grammar and punctuation mistakes?
a:Editing stage
7. In what stage do you start writing your first draft?
a:Writing stage
8. If you come up with a new idea after writing your first draft, are you coming
back to the prewriting stage?
a:yes, because in any moment I can go back, at the first stage (prewriting)
9. Summarize each stage in the process of writing.
a:Prewriting: refers to all activities that help you explore a subject, generate ideas about it. settle on a specific topic establish a purpose,and analyze the audience for your essay.
Writitng:involves expanding some of your best ideas, organizing your thoughts to reflect your purpose and writing a first draft.
Revising: involves rethinking your content and organization so that your writing says exactly what you want it to.
Editing:you should read your paragraph or essay slowly and carefully to make sure no erro in grammar, punctuation, mechanics, or spelling have slipped into your draft.
10.Create a cluster map for each stage in the writing process and link them with each other to create a big cluster map.
a:
a: When I have a lot of ideas and prewriting notes to work, I begin my writing process.
2. What does the writing process comprise?
a: all the activities you do, from choosing a topic to turning in a final draft.
3. According to the reading, what are the stages in the writing process?
a:1.-Prewriting
2.-Writing
3.-Revising
4.-Editing
4. What does it imply to say that the writing process is a cycle?
a: It is a cycle because in any point you may loop in and out of other stages, once you start on a writing project, the stages of writing do not occur in any specific order.
5. What does the writing stage consist of?
a:Consist in try to put all the ideas, notes and thoughts on a sheet of paper with cohernce, developing the topic.
6. In what stage do you correct grammar and punctuation mistakes?
a:Editing stage
7. In what stage do you start writing your first draft?
a:Writing stage
8. If you come up with a new idea after writing your first draft, are you coming
back to the prewriting stage?
a:yes, because in any moment I can go back, at the first stage (prewriting)
9. Summarize each stage in the process of writing.
a:Prewriting: refers to all activities that help you explore a subject, generate ideas about it. settle on a specific topic establish a purpose,and analyze the audience for your essay.
Writitng:involves expanding some of your best ideas, organizing your thoughts to reflect your purpose and writing a first draft.
Revising: involves rethinking your content and organization so that your writing says exactly what you want it to.
Editing:you should read your paragraph or essay slowly and carefully to make sure no erro in grammar, punctuation, mechanics, or spelling have slipped into your draft.
10.Create a cluster map for each stage in the writing process and link them with each other to create a big cluster map.
a:
lunes, 1 de septiembre de 2008
Identify the topic sentence of the paragraph read
The topic sentence is: the second sentence
It involves all the activities you do, from choosing a topic to turning in a final draft.
It involves all the activities you do, from choosing a topic to turning in a final draft.
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